Grandest is going to Sandwich, Cape Cod with her father’s family and we will have a peaceful week. God Bless that bit of dynamite. Daughter told her we might take an overnight trip to LBI and she said, “Who will play with you and Grans?”
Back to my WIP. If you haven’t read Reconstructing Charlie, this is the last part of the saga of the Costigan family. A generous aunt and uncle in Chicago accepted the young niece, Charlie, when she appeared at their door with nothing but a note of introduction. They raised this brilliant young girl and then her younger brother Jimmy. Now, with an elaborate kidnapping scheme in place, the twin sisters text their uncle for help. That excerpt took place last week with a bit of help from all of you. What a team! Moving on. . .
excerpt:
The well known Chicago lawyer, Stuart Alfred, hunkered in to the buttery leather chair in his study and beckoned to the love of his life, Eleanor, who sat across from him.
“Come sit on my lap, darling girl.”
“I would, but since you’ve been eating so many Belgium truffles when you thought I didn’t pay attention, your lap has disappeared.”
He patted his girth and nodded, “At least come a bit closer; The time has come. . .
the walrus said, to talk of many things: of shoes and ships—and sealing wax—of cabbage and kings.”
Eleanor ‘s laughter rang through the room as her floral patterned silk dress flowed when
gracefully she crossed to the love seat and said “Thank you, Lewis Carroll.”
“Sit beside me, dearest and whisper sweet nothing’s in my ear.”
With a wise look on his aging attractive face, he obeyed because in the courtroom, he ruled; at home, Eleanor was in charge.
She unwrapped a truffle, dark chocolate with a coconut filling and let the sweetness melt in her mouth before a quick chew and swallow then pulled her husband’s head down kissing his parted lips to share the chocolate taste.
“ Just before I left the office, I received a text from the twins saying Help.”
She jumped to her feet and paced the study, “What about Elizabeth, maybe she won’t let them go.”
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I like the food imagery!
Chocolate shared. They are an extraordinary couple, so in love after many married years and so generous.
Belgian chocolate gets blamed for so much.
They deserve it! I’m with-holding the box I planned to send to you.
I adore the easy and loving relationship between Eleanor and Stuart. Your description was spot on, very well done.
They are a couple like no other. Imagine being childless rich and happy and then taking all those kids in due to her evil sister’s throwing them away. First Charlie, then Jimmy and way later, the twins.
What a lovely scene, then the sudden statement of the twins danger broke the tranquility…great writing.
Gemma, thanks for the special comment. I appreciate it.
Congrats on your release, Charmaine. I want one of those dark chocolate truffles now.
Hmm. I don’t think so, Paula or maybe if you’re a good girl. . .
Love the sweet – literal and figurative- dynamic between these two. Congrats on the new release!
They are a sweet pair. More to come when they kidnap the girls.
Sounds like just the couple to rescue two kids in trouble! Love and chocolate will save the day. 🙂
(I’ll take Ed’s chocolates, if he doesn’t want them. 🙂 )
Consider them yours! Don’t tell Ed.
They kidnap the girls? Whoa, that adds a little something to my view of this lovely, contented couple.
They gotta do what they gotta do. Tune in next week.
Loved the way the scene played out with their sweet comfortable banter, the sensual sharing of the chocolate, and then the call to arms because danger is afoot for those they care about.
Congrats on the new release!!
Karen , you nailed the scene. It’s funny the way you write and reread to see something wonderful has happened. You hope. Thanks.
Congratulations on the book release! Enjoyed the snippet – a fun mix of Lewis Carroll and chocolate and of course the story at hand! Always well done…
Thanks, dear V. The Alfred’s add a lot of fun to the story. I reached 14 thou last night. Mayhem afoot.
They have such a relaxed, easy relationship.At least it appears so in this snippet.
Yes, they do. Pure love and sex. lots of fun
What a sudden and drastic turn the scene makes at the end! There was no hint of a problem, and then we get blind-sided (in a good way). Nice scene, Charmaine!
Lauren, it’s so good to see your name here. Glad you like the scene. More good stuff to come next week when Aunt and Uncle kidnap the twins–by request.
Hah! A little gentle scolding over his chocolate thievery and health, but he gets a cuddle anyway. Sweet.
Always the cuddle with these two even after many years of marriage. Sweet, indeed. Thanks, Caitlin
These two have a wonderful relationship, and I bet they’ll make some bad guys sorry for messing with the twins. Congrats on the new release.
You’re so right, Elaine. Thanks for best wishes.
Congratulations on the new release!
I’m a little annoyed with Stuart for waiting so long to tell her about the “Help!” message. He should have mentioned that as soon as he came in (men;). Love the description!
Don’t be annoyed with Stuart. He’s such a sweetheart.
I love it when you leave us on such a cliffhanger!! You write with such imagery, it blows me away every time! ❤
Sara, that’s about the best thing anyone has said to me today and it’s not even eight a.m. Love to you, my friend.
Congrats on your release! He got his candied kiss before springing bad news. Smart man!
You’re so right. There’s method to his madness. Candied kisses sound pretty tasty to me.