Moving along, Granny tells her story with a purpose.
Excerpt:
Granny’s lap is numb from Cassie’s weight so she signals Julie to lift the cutie and place her on the couch while she stretches and reaches for the sky with closed eyes.
Julie said,”Gran this isn’t exactly the myth of Sisyphus I’ve been trying to read” and Grans comes back with a snappy retort, “It’s close enough for you to get the general idea so bring us some tea and a few cookies I smell coming from the kitchen and we’ll move on.”
She’s off and running, back without a splash to settle nice and comfy and so do several of her swim team mates who pile in, giggle and wave, melt into the floor like the boneless wonders they are, obviously texted by Julie to hurry and Gran wonder if there’s such a word as texted or texting?
“Here comes the good part so listen up; you’ve all heard of Zeus?” and she looks at the unwrinkled teens; then Gina said, “Like Dr. Seuss? and Katie said, “No dummy, Granny means The Zoot Suits, a big group from the, uh, 50’s; were you alive then, Gran?”
Granny stifles a laugh to glance around the room where Allison is sprawled near the fireplace, Sean glued to her side and she waves a hand—hands—they’r’e holding hands.
They decided to catch her act in person; maybe she should tap dance. “Zeuss was no ordinary god, he was the top of the heap, macho and muscled like you wouldn’t believe without going to the gym and known as one of the seven wonders of the World but his fatal flaw was he liked pretty women, bunches of them.
Is it any wonder that Sisyphus totally jealous of him, decided to spread gossip to ruin Zeuss’s reputation just like some jerks you know at school and when Zeuss found out, he ordered his brother ,Hades, god of the underworld, to put Sisyphus in handcuffs, newly invented at the time; very creative, the Greeks who also cooked up nifty meatballs or was that the Italians? But Sisyphus tricked Hades, who must have been dumber than dirt, by asking Hades to try on the handcuffs first to show him how they worked– in other words, Hades was grounded.
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She’s getting quite the audience there to listen to her tale. 🙂
And what fun it is to write. Thanks, Jessica.
Love this re-telling of the Greek myth!
I’m so pleased you’re enjoying it. I just wrote some more while at the beach. This may turn into a short story.
Now what kind of myth will we have starring not Zeus but Dr. Seuss?
Dopey kids who need a better education is Granny’s plan. And the beat goes on.
Such a wonderfully visual scene, Charmaine! I’d sit and listen, spellbound, too.
Come on over and I’ll write more, Nancy. Thanks for a wonderful comment.
Great fun, Charmaine. I love your storytelling. A fun way to learn Greek mythology.
Hi GF. Thanks for stopping by. I hope you learned a lot about Sisyphus.
I’ve always found Greek mythology to be interesting, even though I know hardly anything about it (there’s SO much to learn). I bet the grandmother’s beaming with joy at the sight of a bunch of young ones wanting to hear her story!
Hi Jake, so good to see you here. I hope you had a good laugh while learning. And there’s more to come.
This is such a cute snippet! Loved the ‘Dr. Seuss/Zoot suits’ bit. Something tells me that Gran is about to rock their worlds with her story. Great work, my friend! 🙂
Thanks, Julie. My pleasure to write an amusing tale and more to come. YIPPEE!
“Hades, who must have been dumber than dirt” ROFL Great snippet, CHarmaine!
I so appreciate your comment. Smiling here in New York.
Ha, Dr. Seuss and Zoot Suits. That’s great. 😉
Happy you are enjoying the story, Amy.
This is one wild tale Gran is spinning. No wonder her audience is growing.
I’m growing along with them. Thanks, Alexis.
This story is the most fun! I love her thoughts as she watches her audience and interacts with them. Way to successfully update the Greek myths! Hugs to you, my friend 🙂
And so the story goes on with me laughing here in New York. Thanks, dear friend.
Ah, I loved this! It was witty and funny. I liked the Zeus – Dr. Seuss pun and how the myth is described using modern language. Kids would love it too.
Thanks so much,. It’s lovely to have royalty enjoy my story.
Such a fun story! I’m not sure it would be approved for research purposes, but it sure is original!
It definitely would not be approved since it’s my own idea. When I finish this part, I’ll have Granny go back to her home close by and decide to get out and meet a man if possible.
Love this story! Grans is a hoot. Love how she gets the teens to listen.
Diane, I’m so happy to hear from you.
Gran’s doing a super job, and the kids will love it.
Hi Elaine, and aren’t we having fun or what?
Love this telling of the gods. lol Clever.
Thanks, Karen. You’re a peach.
I love your mixing of the old and the new! How creative. 🙂 !
Thank you, dear respected friend. I’m considering writing two more as a trilogy and then what?