Head spinning,I tried to focus.Are we out of control or what; a grandma and a grandpa kissing passionately so what’s the big deal?Yeah like some erotic story tale, uh story. I pictured the book cover: Ralph stripped to the waist, showing what’s left of his muscles, gray hair sprouting here and there on his chest and me the heroine,flabby under arms dangling. Title:Still Hot After All Their Years; Best Seller,:Movie Deal
My practical mind took over. “So you paid for O”Briens and haven’t slept there once.
Ralph rolled over and sighed. “A private moment and you bring up real estate.; where did I go right?
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Great insight as to what’s going through her mind. Very realistic. 🙂
Thanks, Jessica. Writers think like that.
I love her thoughts as this is going on, and then her question, bringing things to an abrupt halt, at least for now. 🙂
Romance and reality. What a woman. Thanks Christina
LOL! This made me smile. What a super moment between these two. As always your characters seem like folks who could be living in my neighborhood. Wishing you the best of everything, my friend!
Marcia
I can’t help it. Always the passion and then the fun. What happens next? Thanks for good wishes, Marcia.
Oh dear, she needs to work on her fantasies! But very realistic and I enjoy these two characters. HUGS to you, my friend, and thanks for another fun snippet.
Happy to please my dear buddy. Major Hugs for one I love.
Love the book cover she imagines. Great story!
She;s a funny lady and then she wakes up. What a woman. Thanks, Jenna.
I like how she thinks, too.
Tsk, there should be no focusing during sexy times. I like how she thinks, though. Nice snippet! 🙂
Funny lady, no matter what she says. After all, she;s a writer.
Fun snippet! Looks like she stopped resisting Ralph’s overtures.
Oh, dear Charmaine, the humor in this snippet is wonderful–and a big dose of reality. Well done, my friend. Well done…
Thanks Teresa. What a joy to recieve this.
I love her visions. Your writing is so real.
Cara, your coments mean so much to me.
Great, very real dialogue. I love your characters, Charmaine.
Rachel, I’m waiting for a copy of your book, dear friend.
lol- Loved the book cover description.
Sometimes I get a kick out of what I write as well.Thanks, Karen.
I’m loving this. The truth of love, in its imperfect splendor. Love the last line.
Thanks, Shahi. We are having fun.
LOL. My wife hates the way the back of her arms sag.
All women do, my friend. Best to you.
I have a friend in his 70’s. I think he worried a little about this too when he started dating after his wife died.
Nice realism! 😀
They do, Elaine. They all do.
Yes it is, Amy.
Someone isn’t in the moment! He’ll have to try a little harder.
They are having a bit of fun.
Love the cover description! I can see Hubs and I as the cover models. LOL Great snippet.
So happy to please you, my friend.
Very realistic.
And so it is.
Love this snippet- there’s humor and realism packed into one. Great snippet, Charmaine.
You are a love, Elyzabeth.