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Continuing with Housebroken. After Sally and Steve have fallen in love with this unusual town, River’s Edge in upstate NY where the credo is Kindness to Strangers, they’ve found the perfect house. This snippet takes place the next morning. It’s one of those -Just when you thought it was safe to go into the water moments. . .
and we give you superior retirement package plus you keep new car fully paid. One hitch as you say here in America, Steven San, is arrangement is top secret and the company has been informed you requested retirement as of today. ” Then Ho
Sally arrived home after the best workout in months to find Steve’s car in the driveway and stopped, frightened.
Fear flooded through her as she raced in the house calling, “Steve, Steve,” and up the stairs to the bedroom she ran to find him lying there on the bed face ashen, tie askew.
He struggled to sit up; “I got to work to find a note from Hiro San the top boss left on my desk that said he wanted to see me early in the day so I hurried over to his closed door.
“Steven San,”my superior said with a smile, “We must close your division of the company therefore you are now retired.
Hiro San, the snake, I never liked him, pushed a paper across the desk and said, “Sign here, keep pen.”
“What did you do?” Sally’s hands clenched to hold back tears of the indignity he’d suffered after years of service.
“I had no choice; I signed, accepted a folder with pages of information and with much bowing on his part, I left—out of work for the first time in my life.”
Shocked by the sudden turn of events, Sally said, “Steve, we’ll find a way to survive. Let’s look at the damn folder and figure out how we’ll manage before you get a job and I can work. This is no time to move.” Her dreams of River’s Edge faded.
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